Hmm

So in this post there are a couple of paragraphs that read kind of strangely, maybe because I am using the kind of short active sentences that work well in physical description, but aren't appropriate for this kind of topic. I wonder if more complex sentence structures work better for more abstract ideas, when you don't need to give the reader a break to construct mental images or allow for the passing of time. Instead, you develop a kind of flow, as if to say, "Wait! I haven't completed the thought yet."

Alternatively I am writing things too obvious to say.